Book review
Your Attention, Please: How to Appeal to Today's Distracted, Disinterested, Disengaged, Disenchanted, and Busy Consumer
Paul B. Brown and Alison Davis
(Adams Media, 2006)
This little book has become one of my favorite writing resources. Not just for the tips (which are great) or the examples (which are fun to read and often humorous), but because I can open it to literally any page for a reminder to keep my marketing communication short, simple and relevant.
Any page will do, because this book practices what it preaches. The information is straightforward, entertaining and easy to digest.
After making the case for why people are tuned out and turned off (information overload), authors Brown and Davis dive right into practical advice and techniques for getting and holding your audience's attention, including:
The 7 Deadly Sins of Poor Communication
- Making it all about "me" (focus on the reader instead).
- Trying to cover too much (create a high concept and stick to it).
- Using complicated, abstract concepts (fill in the blanks with simple, specific, concrete details).
- Losing the human element (tell a story the reader can relate to).
- Creating a dense thicket of impenetrable information (provide easy navigation with headings and short paragraphs, and make it visual).
- Going on too long (keep it short and sweet).
- Lecturing and hectoring (provide practical hints, tips and 'how to' instructions so the reader can take action on the information).
The chapter on storytelling is excellent, and the authors use storytelling throughout the book to illustrate points and keep the reader engaged.
They also use quotes very effectively. While many of the quotes are from famous figures or business pundits, my favorite is from the book itself:
"No one in your audience has the time or the patience to wade through a bunch of nonsense."
Amen to that! And no self-employed coach can afford to WRITE a bunch of nonsense that their customers aren't reading, either. Unfortunately, it's a lesson that many of us have to learn the hard way.
Bottomline: Your Attention Please is on my short list of must-read material for coaches who write their own marketing copy and program content.
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